Identifying Basic Grammar Patterns

While I was completing this blog post I stumbled across a few underdeveloped parts of my writing. To begin, I don't vary my sentence purposes enough to provide a variety in tone throughout the paper. As well, if I have different sentence structures like switching between simple, compound and compound-complex sentences will also allow the text to be a little more digestible for the reader. Finally, my use of conjunctions has been pretty similar so using new conjunctions to connect dependent clauses and even two independent clauses. The use of correlative conjunctions can really add some variety to how I connect independent clauses.

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Here is link to my paragraph.