Draft of Public Argument

Here is the link to my rough draft of my public argument. Please remember this is a rough draft and not representative of its final form. For a few days it will remain in outline form to help me organize my ideas. However, I would greatly appreciate it if you could look for any grammar mistakes or could point to sentence that either repeat themselves or make no sense. Thank you for taking a look at my draft.

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