Sunday, October 18, 2015

Paragraph Analysis 2

While I was reading through the body paragraphs of my essay I started to notice a similar trend. I have a formulaic way of writing.  I tend to write a topic sentence, provide a piece of evidence and then write some analysis. While this is neither a weakness or strength it is predictable and I want to revise to change that up a bit somehow. The strengths across my paragraphs were my paragraph length and providing a clear main point. My paragraphs have excellent length and I don't feel I have more to add. Also, my main point is always clear and stated boldly at the beginning of the paragraph. My weaknesses are my lack of clarity in my analysis and my lack of key words and transitional paragraph phrases to tie my points together. I need to weave more of my examples together across multiple paragraphs. I intend to spend time doing that while revising.

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Here is the link to my Paragraph Analysis.

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